Thursday, October 7, 2010
तो क्या बात होती ...
दिखावे की दुनिया में चेहरों के ऊपर
मुखौटे ना होते, तो क्या बात होती
वो झरने, जो चुपचाप संगीत गाते
जो वो बोल पाते, तो क्या बात होती
वो मिटटी से लगाव, वो कागज़ की नाव
वो पल लौट आते, तो क्या बात होती
सामने जो बनते हैं, मेरे चहेते
पीठ पीछे ना बदलें, तो क्या बात होती
दो पल के लिए, सब हाथ थाम लेते
ज़िन्दगी भर निभाएं, तो क्या बात होती
सांस चलने तक सब , साथ हैं मुस्कुराते
कोई मरने पर रोये, तो क्या बात होती...
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HI
ReplyDeleteBhai this is really nice poem that come form real life.
i am waiting for your next update.
u have come up with a poem on ur blog after a long time.. like ur previous ones this one too is well expressed.. good work..
ReplyDeleteवो मिटटी से लगाव, वो कागज़ की नाव
जो वक़्त लौट जाए, तो क्या बात होती
Waah !
quite nice... especially the last two lines :-)
ReplyDeleteReally nice!! Kya baat, kya baat, kya baaat....!!
ReplyDeleteवो मिटटी से लगाव, वो कागज़ की नाव
ReplyDeleteवो पल लौट आते, तो क्या बात होती
really touching lines...
nice post..
Kash fri se wo bachpan lout ata, to kya baat hoti......Nice Bro
ReplyDeletevery good suyash..... hum bhi agar kuch aisa likh paate to "kya baat hoti" :)
ReplyDelete@ Dipu Bhai- Thnx bhai. M glad u liked it :)
ReplyDelete@ Pragati~ Shukriya mohtarmaan
@Paigli Di~ Since u read and commented, there have been some changes, if only u can notice :)
@ Swati~ Thnx dear!
Lalu Bhai~ Thnx bhai :)
ReplyDeleteRaka Bhai~ thnx!
@ Anjo~ Shayari waali Comment:)
very well written.
ReplyDeletekaash life sach me aisi ho jati..
@ Gabbar~ Thank u hai G :)
ReplyDeletegud one...thoda aur lambi likhte na..bahut short me nipta diya.
ReplyDeleteAgar aap ki imagination hakikat ban jati
ReplyDeleteto kya baat hoti
hey.. very nice..
ReplyDeleteit is really fact of 2days world....
kuchh line 2 awesome hain.. dil ko chhuu gye..
@ Azra~ Humm I felt d same, bt den decided to keep it short, as I guess I wnt be able to add too much to this write up.
ReplyDelete@ Amit~ Sahi hai bhai:)
@ Jumbo~ Haan beta dil toh he chhoyegi cz dimaag toh...;)
ReplyDeletewell i dunno hindi... but looking at the comments i think its really a nice poem :)
ReplyDelete@ Dan~ Thnx dear!
ReplyDeletei liked it..so true..!
ReplyDeleteits long time..working on anything?
@ Swap~ Shukriya mohtarmaan
ReplyDeleteYeah will soon cum up with my new post :)
I am very late ,sorry . your this poem showes that u are near to understand the real face of'INSAN' and the differences between days of 'MASTI'and responsibilities.
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