My Quote Of The Day

Home Don't judge me by what u have seen in me. Remember what u have seen in me is only what I have chosen to show u!

Thursday, October 7, 2010

तो क्या बात होती ...


दिखावे की दुनिया में चेहरों के ऊपर
मुखौटे ना होते, तो क्या बात होती

वो झरने, जो चुपचाप संगीत गाते
जो वो बोल पाते, तो क्या बात होती

वो मिटटी से लगाव, वो कागज़ की नाव
वो पल लौट आते, तो क्या बात होती

सामने जो बनते हैं, मेरे चहेते
पीठ पीछे ना बदलें, तो क्या बात होती

दो पल के लिए, सब हाथ थाम लेते
ज़िन्दगी भर निभाएं, तो क्या बात होती

सांस चलने तक सब , साथ हैं मुस्कुराते
कोई मरने पर रोये, तो क्या बात होती...

21 comments:

  1. HI
    Bhai this is really nice poem that come form real life.
    i am waiting for your next update.

    ReplyDelete
  2. u have come up with a poem on ur blog after a long time.. like ur previous ones this one too is well expressed.. good work..

    वो मिटटी से लगाव, वो कागज़ की नाव
    जो वक़्त लौट जाए, तो क्या बात होती

    Waah !

    ReplyDelete
  3. quite nice... especially the last two lines :-)

    ReplyDelete
  4. Really nice!! Kya baat, kya baat, kya baaat....!!

    ReplyDelete
  5. वो मिटटी से लगाव, वो कागज़ की नाव
    वो पल लौट आते, तो क्या बात होती


    really touching lines...
    nice post..

    ReplyDelete
  6. Kash fri se wo bachpan lout ata, to kya baat hoti......Nice Bro

    ReplyDelete
  7. very good suyash..... hum bhi agar kuch aisa likh paate to "kya baat hoti" :)

    ReplyDelete
  8. @ Dipu Bhai- Thnx bhai. M glad u liked it :)

    @ Pragati~ Shukriya mohtarmaan

    @Paigli Di~ Since u read and commented, there have been some changes, if only u can notice :)

    @ Swati~ Thnx dear!

    ReplyDelete
  9. Lalu Bhai~ Thnx bhai :)

    Raka Bhai~ thnx!

    @ Anjo~ Shayari waali Comment:)

    ReplyDelete
  10. very well written.
    kaash life sach me aisi ho jati..

    ReplyDelete
  11. gud one...thoda aur lambi likhte na..bahut short me nipta diya.

    ReplyDelete
  12. Agar aap ki imagination hakikat ban jati
    to kya baat hoti

    ReplyDelete
  13. hey.. very nice..
    it is really fact of 2days world....
    kuchh line 2 awesome hain.. dil ko chhuu gye..

    ReplyDelete
  14. @ Azra~ Humm I felt d same, bt den decided to keep it short, as I guess I wnt be able to add too much to this write up.

    @ Amit~ Sahi hai bhai:)

    ReplyDelete
  15. @ Jumbo~ Haan beta dil toh he chhoyegi cz dimaag toh...;)

    ReplyDelete
  16. well i dunno hindi... but looking at the comments i think its really a nice poem :)

    ReplyDelete
  17. i liked it..so true..!
    its long time..working on anything?

    ReplyDelete
  18. @ Swap~ Shukriya mohtarmaan

    Yeah will soon cum up with my new post :)

    ReplyDelete
  19. I am very late ,sorry . your this poem showes that u are near to understand the real face of'INSAN' and the differences between days of 'MASTI'and responsibilities.

    ReplyDelete